Double Page Spread Improvements

Feedback from my first attempt at making my double page: 

• "Use more colours to make the page stand out more"
• "It's too simple, you need to add effects to make the title stand out, and make the text into columns that can fit from one end of the column to the other side"
• "Add other features to the page, so it looks more appealing to the audience".
• "Keep referring back to the house style, and add more things to the page, making it more exciting, starting with the Heading."