Audience feedback and Improvements:
- The use bold and thin text, shows the reader what is supposed to stand out more.
- The colours used continuously makes the page look neat and easy to read
- Change the bottom image to another model, so the magazine looks like it provides a various amount of stories - Different type of image
- I made improvements by, changing the pink colour on the sentences underneath the title of each page, to black rather pink, this makes the page look more formal.
- I made improvements by making the website text thin (at the bottom of the page), rather than bold.
- I changes the image, by doing another photo shoot, using a different model.
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